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Saint Shields ch1_p_11_12 by 47ness Saint Shields ch1_p_11_12 by 47ness
Pages 11 and 12 of chapter 1.

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otaku-storm Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2007   Writer
omgosh omgosh omgosh I can't wait until the next part ^^
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47ness Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Ah thanks. Please to be giving me another week or so to get working on that; I must take care of Finals all of this week. ♫ ^___^
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otaku-storm Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2007   Writer
Ugh, Finals XP I think I have to take them next week...

Oh, s'ok if it takes you a while - take your time *nod nod* I know I can't be rushed with stuff so I understand.
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Kikio-sama Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2007
D: cliffhanger!

I'm officially hooked. I've read all the previous pages and I have to say that I really like the way you tell the story; it catches one's attention and it's very dinamic. It's interesting so far, too :)
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47ness Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks~! It's a busy schedule, but I'll see how much I can upload in the coming weeks.... ;D
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kittykittyhunter Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2007   Writer
I should be annoyed at her for endangering all the Saint Shields... but she's somehow incredibly sweet >>. Which therefore makes it diifciult for me to hate the little chibi... I pity Ozuma for being forced to 'put his foot down' and give such a harsh and out-of-character command. The interaction in the first half conveys a lot of hints about the relationship that Korl and Ozuma have - whilst she respects Ozuma's authority and loves him, she is still stubborn and unwilling to change her own character. Consequently, Ozuma often allows her to have her own way on the basis that he is a caring person and is unwilling to force Korl into situations where he becomes an autocrat and she becomes a victim, but this inconsistency of his actions has caused the situation to backfire; Korl follows Ozuma's orders but only when they agree with her own ideals. Thus, even though the two care about each other, Ozuma finds it difficult to be regarded seriously as a leader and Korl has yet to reach the age of maturity at which she will realise the dangerous nature of her actions.

Or maybe I'm just reading far too deep into it :XD:. Still, there's a lot of emotion there. The implication seems to be that Korl and Ozuma have a sibling-like relationship.
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47ness Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
How do you READ MY MIND like that!? :XD:

…seriously. I think you got it. :D

I don't know what more there is to say. You'll just have to sit back n' enjoy the show… ^~
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kittykittyhunter Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2007   Writer
:lol: I'm glad I got it. :w00t: That's one point for me! I can't wait to see how this story develops ^^.
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shinneth Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oooonly thing that stands out in my mind is the almost-uniform way you're doing most of the sound effects, and it kind of throws it off and kind of takes the emotion away from it. XD I think you're on the right track with like, say, fzzZZzzZZzzz, but tap, glance, turn, and nod feel kinda generic and don't really look good with the rest of your BAD-ASSED MASTERPIECE. Not so much the words as it is the font and the size/presentation as such.

Yeah. That's reaching. But I know that's what you want DEEP DOWN.

... Korl will get hers. :D She will pay for her INSOLENCE, yes?
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47ness Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
The font for those 'cruddy' SFXs is, of course, Impact. It's like teh ultimate place-holder font before I decide on a decent one. :D Unfortunately knowing HOW lazy I can be I'll probably forget about fixing them. XD;;

But seriously, I totally appreciate that level of criticism. It's stuff that definitely can and will be fix'd. (I mean, you know ALL the best fonts to use as is!)

(Nyahahah, insolence is RIGHT. :XD: I figure we can discuss spoilers here since NO ONE ever reads my comment threads- even though they should because I hate repeating myself over and over. Bastards.)
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