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DAT COMIC - p01 p02 by 47ness DAT COMIC - p01 p02 by 47ness
My entry for 24-Hour Comic Day (no title yet)

story and rough layouts during the 24 hours; additional penciling done afterwards


47ness, 2011


Page 3 & 4
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editorblue Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
THIS IS GORGEOUS!
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47ness Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
Thanks. :)
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Sunogsabatis Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love how from a distance, it looks like the cityscape is populated by humans, but then we see the flamingos in the second panel. :D I like how in the background, there's a sprawling, modern city, and in the foreground, you have a more turn-of-the century feel--like the streetlamps. ^^ I like the high angle in the first one, as if we're flying, in, and then all the way down to street level as we see the car from below. I love how chatty you make the flamingos without them saying a word. : D

And that car, wow...^^^ So much detail. ^^ I love the hats on the flamingos! ^^ I'm trying to figure if the smiling guy in the car is a passenger or the driver--and I like how the guy opening the car door for the flamingos look aloof and somewhat deferential.

Awesome work! ^^ ^^
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47ness Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
Thanks for all your thoughtful feedback! :,D

Mmm, I think the smiling guy in the car is just another flamingo craning his head; it's any wonder how they all fit in there. XD;
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Sunogsabatis Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My pleasure! ^^

That must be a huge car to fit all of the flamingos in there! : D
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zkfanart Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
Really cool.... specially for the station wagon ;) I appreciated the mix of old and modern style on it ;)
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Laitma Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Professional General Artist
H-h-holy shit man, I still can't believe your work, augh! PERSPECTIVE and your super-gorgeous bold strokes~ augh, so spectacular. And flamingos?? This is gonna be AWESOME. 8)
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Rocky-O Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
hahah this is unexpectingly hilarious!!
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47ness Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011
I was sitting with some hilarious n' clever artists/writers, most of the night. ;P ::felt da love::
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TOONOLOGY Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
Wow that awsome. I love the background of the city.
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Sio64 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Professional Artist
Is this just pencil? And are those dapper flamingos?!

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47ness Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
The first page has ink .....and then I realized it was bleeding through. (I was using both sides of the paper fff) XD;;;


INDEED.
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Sio64 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Professional Artist
I hate when that happens. :stare:

And freaking awesome! :la:
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